colours!
well, i was chatting with my friend. he writes poems, u see. so he tole me to tell him a theme and give him a few words...to help him write one. and he did. and they were really beautiful! he can write poems!!! hw cool is that! and they all rhyme! man! then i tole him to give me one theme and a few words. i so wanted to try this out. haha. but this is the result! so not 'poematic'. usually my writings dun rhyme, u see. but i was trying to make them rhyme and ended having a 'poem' that didnt make a single sense out a camel's head! hehe!
his theme for me was....colours! (wow! so much to write abt! and so i THOT!!)
his words: handphone, electricity, pen...and story book! (hw cruel cld he get! hmphh!)
and so i tried it out...and this is what i ended up with...
colours
love is full of colours
my life is full of love
red, pink, green, blue
everything i see appears to be you
i closed my eyes
and felt your touch
yellow was all i saw
as electricity made me budge
wouldn't you touch me?
when you talked
on your handphone
i felt green
in my bone
wouldn't you talk to me?
i bought a pink storybook
on how to get you on my hook
wouldn't you look at me?
but all i could do
was to grab a pen
like a very
expressive man
as the blue ink flowed
all my thoughts showed
i wrote these lines
with you in my mind
i love you
and i love
the colours in you
uyir vida sonnaal uyir vidukindren...unai vida sonnaal unai vida maaten!
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